Bite My Tongue- Song

a song i wrote a couple weeks ago.

Bite My Tongue

tonight ill lie awake

and think about all the mistakes

i've made

like all of the times i've made you cry

and all of the times i've lied 

but only god knows if i changed

take me back

to when i still had the time to admit that i was wrong

and if i went back 

to that moment in time

when you were always still mine

ill bite my tongue

and save the last words on my mind

because i know they'll never change that way you think

but maybe you will see the day

but like i said only god knows if i've changed

take me back

to when i still had the time to admit that i was wrong

and if i went back 

to that moment in time

when you were always still mine

still mine...

Reviews

[Acacia Avel]

Your words flow like water but a few seem to be caught on jagged rocks. All of your works display a lot of talent. I like the messages a ton.

[What happened to simple..]

Awh I like it =) not sure about the rhythm and some words, but a little editing and you'll have a really great song!