for the first time...

for the first time...

A Poem by taylorgriffin.

i feel like i'm doing something right
i waited for you after class
and just like that i brightened your day
just as easy as you bring the smile to my face
every time i see you
or feel you
its like a head rush
im just living for whats next;
its a mystery
its a thrill
and i'm addicted
just like a drug i shot you into my veins
and now i'm begging for more
i wont go to rehab
because i NEED what we have
and i'm not giving it up for anything
no form of money
no type of change
because for the first time...


© 2010 taylorgriffin.

Author's Note

not a poem, just a descriptive description of how i feel <3

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Posted 9 Years Ago

...Poems are sometimes descriptive descriptions of how people feel...

Anywho. You need to capitalize the i's, because that's pretty much the rule of grammar and pronouns. You also need to capitalize the i's in I'm, and add ' to the other I'ms and it's.

Other than that, it's a cute little poem. :]

Posted 10 Years Ago

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3 Reviews
Added on October 13, 2010
Last Updated on October 13, 2010



stanton, CA

i am taylor. i write songs. more..