for the first time...

i feel like i'm doing something right

i waited for you after class

and just like that i brightened your day

just as easy as you bring the smile to my face

every time i see you

or feel you

its like a head rush

im just living for whats next;

its a mystery

its a thrill

and i'm addicted

just like a drug i shot you into my veins

and now i'm begging for more

i wont go to rehab

because i NEED what we have

and i'm not giving it up for anything

no form of money

no type of change

because for the first time...

iknowthisisright

Author's Note

not a poem, just a descriptive description of how i feel <3

Reviews

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Cute..!!

[Looouise]

...Poems are sometimes descriptive descriptions of how people feel...

Anywho. You need to capitalize the i's, because that's pretty much the rule of grammar and pronouns. You also need to capitalize the i's in I'm, and add ' to the other I'ms and it's.

Other than that, it's a cute little poem. :]