May I Kiss You?

May I Kiss You?

A Poem by Thomas Philmore Jackson
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A look into what one thinks when that question is asked!

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I ask if I may kiss you.
You just smile; no answer is necessary.

Your mind visions the following…


Our initial kiss, a flirting of our lips.
My tongue flicking lightly -
Asking, "Do you want me to stop?"

Tip of your tongue runs over my lips.
Touching every part,
Inside and out -
Over and over again.

Your tongue, tickling me, tickle, tickle.


I press my lips gently to yours.
They are hot and fast.
Not resting long on any one spot.
I have such a desire to go on.
Kisses of passion all over your face.
Returning back to your mouth.
Our tongues dance together.
We are exploring.

 

So, I ask again if I may kiss you.

© 2010 Thomas Philmore Jackson


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This is cute. It's not often I see a poem about what a person's thinking when they're asked for a kiss, so kudos to you for being original.
"Your tongue, tickling me, tickle, tickle." I giggled at this line. It's also not often I hear a guy say "tickle tickle" in any context and I thought that was endearing.
The second and third stanza (especially the second for some reason) were very sensual in their own right and I enjoyed the visual that came along with them. Then you got cheesy with the tickle tickle, but anyway. It was difficult to imagine lips being gently pressed AND hot / fast, but I get it.
I really like this. :) And she'll do well to say yes.

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very cute indeed. or maybe cos im a girl. lol. very sweet ...but just kiss already!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is cute. It's not often I see a poem about what a person's thinking when they're asked for a kiss, so kudos to you for being original.
"Your tongue, tickling me, tickle, tickle." I giggled at this line. It's also not often I hear a guy say "tickle tickle" in any context and I thought that was endearing.
The second and third stanza (especially the second for some reason) were very sensual in their own right and I enjoyed the visual that came along with them. Then you got cheesy with the tickle tickle, but anyway. It was difficult to imagine lips being gently pressed AND hot / fast, but I get it.
I really like this. :) And she'll do well to say yes.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Thomas Philmore Jackson
Thomas Philmore Jackson

Washington, DC



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Currently writing new poems and editing stories. Lost my host for my story site, searching for a new one. Also working on my first book. "Exposed" will be filled with my poetry. Print date TBD. more..

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