Sonnet on Love Renewed (revised)

Sonnet on Love Renewed (revised)

A Poem by Trevor Jay Bloodworth
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Classic theme; love lost, love found.

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Sleep is over now, but still I will dream

Of all of our long gone and ancient days.

Night after night, oh why does nothing seem

To not remind me of our quaint old ways?

Gone is all the time that we spent alone,

Love that has just seemed to simply vanish.

All our yesterdays cannot be unknown.

Lives that hurt can do nothing but banish

The great fear of having to love again.

Oh but wait, here comes another lover,

Can they bring me the beautiful quaint Zen

Of a life I have yet to uncover?

A brighter tomorrow with my new love,

Beauty that can rise to the skies above.

© 2013 Trevor Jay Bloodworth


Author's Note

Trevor Jay Bloodworth
Revised version of my "Sonnet on Love Renewed". Please point out any spelling errors so that I can fix them. All criticisms welcome!

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"Can they bring me the beautiful quaint Zen
Of a life I have yet to uncover?
A brighter tomorrow with my new love,
Beauty that can rise to the skies above."

Beautiful lines. A message that many will relate to. This poem is filled with so much emotion, not only read but felt, and that is the true beauty of this amazing piece. Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Trevor Jay Bloodworth

11 Years Ago

Many thanks, my friend. Writing about love and using the sonnet just seem so natural, you know?
I love the way you've composed this, while reading this I was very impressed by the use of words you've penned. Great job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Trevor Jay Bloodworth

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much for stopping by. I'm glad that you liked it.
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Sam
I love the last 3 lines....
Of a life I have yet to uncover?
A brighter tomorrow with my new love,
Beauty that can rise to the skies above.

Blissful and beautiful. The message is as old as time but never makes it easier. No complaints here. Look forward to reading more.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Trevor Jay Bloodworth

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Sam.
Sam

11 Years Ago

Any time Trevor. :)
A Must Read....Line 8 "Lives that hurt can do nothing but banish," is quite remarkable. Your words convey an emotion that runs near and dear to my heart. Well Done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Trevor Jay Bloodworth

11 Years Ago

You're too kind. Thank you very much. I'm glad that you liked it as much as you did.
Chandra.HEntertainment

11 Years Ago

Of course ...Your welcome. It's amazing to me how a piece of writing or "poem" if you will...can br.. read more
no errors but a great write,i enjoyed reading

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on July 29, 2013
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Trevor Jay Bloodworth
Trevor Jay Bloodworth

Bradford, TN



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Just another guy. Nothing special. 22 years old. From Tennessee. I started writing as a hobby while on deployment. I love poetry and that's my art form. I'm heavily influenced by the poets of the Roma.. more..

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