Every Night

Every Night

A Poem by Talia
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All I want to do
Is stay up and talk to you
every single night

© 2019 Talia


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I adore short poetry , its the best :)
made me think , what would be the rest , what happened just before you wrote those words

All I want to do
Is stay up and talk to you
every single night
But you gone?

All I want to do
Is stay up and talk to you
every single night
and days

All I want to do
Is stay up and talk to you
every single night
I hate it so much?

All I want to do
Is stay up and talk to you
every single night
but I can't?

All I want to do
Is stay up and talk to you
every single night
Shame?

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Talia

4 Months Ago

Before? All those questions and more
Glad you enjoyed!


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AJW
I miss that kind of love. Great poem I really enjoyed it.

Posted 4 Months Ago


short and to the point, like this one

Posted 4 Months Ago


Talia

4 Months Ago

Thank you for reading!
I feel this way about someone. This sounds so sweet even though there isn't much content there. Great job.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Talia

4 Months Ago

Thank you!
It is honest, and direct, which I like.
Nicely done.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Talia

4 Months Ago

Thanks for reading!
I adore short poetry , its the best :)
made me think , what would be the rest , what happened just before you wrote those words

All I want to do
Is stay up and talk to you
every single night
But you gone?

All I want to do
Is stay up and talk to you
every single night
and days

All I want to do
Is stay up and talk to you
every single night
I hate it so much?

All I want to do
Is stay up and talk to you
every single night
but I can't?

All I want to do
Is stay up and talk to you
every single night
Shame?

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Talia

4 Months Ago

Before? All those questions and more
Glad you enjoyed!
It's a feat to write a haiku that rhymes and flows at the same time. Sweetly cheesy, but utterly brilliant! Well done!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Talia

4 Months Ago

Thank you!
emipoemi

4 Months Ago

my pleasure.

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Added on August 24, 2019
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