something said

something said

A Story by Andrew Vaughn
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a true story

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i said something today 

something i never thought id say


too long i had lingered about mistakes i once made

how good we had it and i just walked away 


as the years they past we stayed close but it was never the same

we both may have been young but  i was the one who was stupid 


i never imagined what i would feel, seeing you with another

how the regret could choke out everything id planned to say


this time regret was different not the regret for leaving you

but regret for lacking the courage  to tell you i needed you


for letting  you slip away not knowing how much i had to lose

also not trying to talk to you 

 

now and then in my sleep i'd pretend that we again were more than friends

but as quickly as dreams begin they end


so i said something today, something i could never say

i told how much i still want to be with you

© 2012 Andrew Vaughn


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Wow, I can honestly relate to this completely since there's a guy I used to date that I still have feelings for and I was too stupid to let him go. Now, I go to bed and dream that we're again more than two good friends. But you know how that ends, ---waking up to find yourself back in reality. It sucks, but I eventually told the guy how I felt (that I wanted to be with him). It was sadly too late, since he was already talking to another girl. Life and love sucks sometimes but oh well I just have to move on! Great job, Andrew! :)

Ashley Rivers-- Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is sweet. It holds together nicely.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Andrew Vaughn
Andrew Vaughn

houston, TX



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i write what i feel im 21 and i play guitar in the united states navy music is the other big part of who i am so most of my work is lyrics. i just want feed back of all kind. hope you li.. more..

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