SAD

" Relatively a very old work of mine .... Found it so here it comes "

Here I am again.
Laying in bed.
Crying myself to sleep.
Wondering why you will never feel for me the way I feel for you.  
Am I too ugly?
Am I just not good enough?
Is it my scars?
Tell me and I will do anything and everything to change.
Just to be with you.
I've been beaten and broken so much in the past.
Its hard for me to trust anyone.
But yet.
I need someone to fill in this empty space in my heart.
No.
Not someone.
You.
I need you.
Here.
With me.
You make me complete.
You make my heart skip a beat.
You make me laugh.
And smile.
And you make me happy.
I just wish you knew.
That I'm laying here in bed.
Cold.
Alone.
Scared.
Hurt.
Damaged.
Full of tears.
And worst of all.
Without you.

Reviews

[Prritiy]

I need someone to fill in this empty space in my heart.
No.
Not someone.
You.
I need you.

a sad poem of a heart which longs for a true companion rather the companion and he be true, written nicely.

best wishes.

[tuvi]

thanks for the comment

[Prritiy]

you are welcome

[ghania ali]

Laying in bed.
Crying myself to sleep.
Wondering why you will never feel for me the way I feel for you.

I really like this lines. Very heart touching poem

[ayosonolowo]

Nice writting
from the deep side of the heart
its sad
but nicely done

[Dev~lovableguy]

Owwwww...that was touching! :(
Your poem depicts the emotion of an ignored lover....i wish it never happens to me! Anyways, i loved it..
Keep it up TUVI! :)

[tuvi]

HeY DeV,

WiSh ThAt NeVeR hAPpENs WiTh AnYoNe .......

Thanks for the review ....

[one sky]

A very old work but a real proof of being a writer at young age.

In life, we always need someone who would complete us. Someone to be one's partner...the other half of his heart. Without that person, life is such a misery.

Nice poem.

[tuvi]

thanks a lot Margaux

[Sami Khalil]

"With me.
You make me complete.
You make my heart skip a beat.
You make me laugh.
And smile.
And you make me happy.
I just wish you knew.
That I'm laying here in bed.
Cold.
Alone.
Scared.
Hurt.
Damaged.
Full of tears."
Wow . A bit sad but an awesome write and so honest...Thank you for sharing...:)

[tuvi]

ur welcome sami

[Sami Khalil]

MY pleasure...:)

[Shweta Singh]

I don't know your age girl but I love your innocence & loudness.
Keep enjoying life with all it's strides..it's boring if it's too peaceful ;)

[tuvi]

I know shweta this one is a bit childlike , it was written when i was little younger than I'm 2dy :P (just the difference of what I see of myself in terms of age) to be precise this poem is about 9 yrs back !!

[Vikrantsingh]

Feeling with powerful emotional touches. Oh.. this one is very sad and heartfelt Tuvi :)
I loved this poem :)
Can't comment more as this happens to everyone, we cry, we go crazy etc.
Nicely captured and executed :)

Smiles :)
Singh :)

[tuvi]

ya we cry and swing with our moods :P
this is very old write up ....

[Vikrantsingh]

But nice thought :)