Inanition

I rose this morning
throbbing for your arms
The depletedness I never thought of
a transition I wasn't prepared for.

I seem to lose all the fortitude,
and I can’t keep any garrison,
All I look out is for some healing,
for the emptiness and lonely feeling..!!

My words have turned into deep sigh,
as I fill my heart with tears I cry,
I don’t know if this is real or not,
but emptiness is all I’ve got..!!

I cannot find anything to say or do,
This twinge is something I never knew,
things get worse and out of control,
as hollowness reaches to my soul..!!

They strike hard inside, like a sharp dart,

The broken pieces of my dreams and heart,
I never imagined myself being this weak,
because vacuousness has reached to its peak..!!

This fear and solitude keeps growing,
the stains of which have started showing,
I try my best to put a stop to that,
this desertedness becomes difficult to laugh at..!!

The words they always said, I now believe,
love means nothing and people always leave,
Loving you was nothing but foolishness,
and I lost everything but this barrenness..!!

Reviews

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Okay..okay..okay. It's about love again. There's no wrong in loving, but one thing I've learned was that you must love first yourself...like what's said in the song THE GREATEST LOVE OF ALL.

If someone doesn't like you, then let him go. Remember that some good things never last...because they would be replaced with better and best things. LOL.

Smile. There are more people in the world...it's not only you and him. So there are more better people than him who could give you the best things.

Going back to this poem, it has a nice rhyming scheme. Nice choice of words, too. Keeo writing.