extremis

you know..

if words ever apply

to us..here..

..i am quiet

               shy i

know u know

that's why i feel this creeping up tendency

of shutting up like i usually 

                                           do

but your t e n d e r n e s s

your  c a r e s s

i cherry 

sh

why oh why oh why???????????????

(does this sound familiar_)

it is not enough to be as proof

but it feels

                 right

Reviews

[Guilt]

Curious form and choice of words. That last section seems out of place for me. The cherry-sh felt like the end for me. I like the originality of your pace. I see an awkward interaction, and I love it :)

- Guilt