Lacquered Dreams

Lacquered Dreams

A Poem by Trée
"

Come with me

"

Holding you
as the wind
holds
a flame

We twirl
the day
as the sun
twirls
the world

The sky
our carousel
gallop
with me
on lacquered
dreams

© 2009 Trée


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Beautiful word choices - so few words saying so much. It is like they are a sweet whispered promise :) Nice

Kath

Posted 6 Years Ago


These are light and pretty images - not that you can't write dark and awful, I'm sure - but how refreshing! This was a pleasure to read. Thanks for posting.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oh, I echo Emma's review..
So much said with so little.
That is the beauty of life.
Wonderful poem!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Few words saying so much. This is beautiful, subtle. Wonderful post.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 21, 2009

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Trée
Trée

Franklin, TN



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When I was in college I was told I should not consider a career in writing. For the next 20 years I wrote nothing. About three years ago, I discovered blogging and fractals. I started posting fractals.. more..

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