A Poem by thisXgirlXcanXrawr(:

Running away from who i am. 

Hurting myself because i can.

Suffering from my thoughts of doubt.

Can't even get out and about.


I just can't make it stop.

In so much pain i drop.

Mascara bleeds from my eyes.

How can you not hear my cries.


I'm a f**k up, always have been.My mind, my heart, always this broken.

Can't think of a reason to get out of bed.

So much s**t running through this head.


My mind is gone, my heartbeat frozen.

Looks like my fate has been chosen.

Make sure i'm barried 6 feet deep.

So i can get a good nights sleep. 

© 2011 thisXgirlXcanXrawr(:

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The pain conveyed in this poem is overwhelming, and makes me want to rescue her. There's no light at the end, just sleep. Powerful!

Posted 2 Years Ago

sad to write like this, your young. go out and live it like you rented it and don't give a s**t life is the big gamble play like your the House. Winning and giving are the same feeling. they go hand in hand. write about loving, peace and harmony God or Love, both are the same. draw me a picture in words that are honed like a knife get rid of words unneeded its a good piece 100% Orson Wells said why use big word when little words are easier

Posted 2 Years Ago

I can relate to this so much. Good. But sad.

Posted 6 Years Ago

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Added on February 4, 2011
Last Updated on February 4, 2011



Indianapolis, IN

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