Monster

Monster

A Poem by The High Poet
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Another poem from my crazy mind lol

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I am not the man I want to be

So much anger inside of me

Rage and anger is all that I know

Has been with me since I started to grow

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I put on a mask that wears a big smile

Yet my anger burns like a funeral pile

Burning my soul with this heated rage

Must not let my monster out of his cage

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For if I do, you won't like what you see

The raging monster that is really me

So I try to keep that part of me in the dark

But my monster is strong and has left his mark

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© 2010 The High Poet


Author's Note

The High Poet
not finished but like everything a work in progress

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Please complete this. I do not know what motivation you need to complete this but I would like to know how this poem ends. I am seeing anger and darkness and chaos and I feel like the story doesn't have to end there. The poem is both raw yet polished--that makes it more, in a way, magical.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Although pertaining heavy themes this poem has rapid fluency caused by the rhyme, I'm not one to discourage rhyming, I'm a fan of the art and therefore find this a vary interesting write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Anger makes me sad and I don't like to be sad. It's a circle of sadness and anger. Certainly it is unhuman. Good writing, as usual.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Reminds me of me

Posted 8 Years Ago


I think that your monster can easily work as a metaphor for the darkness in all people and can mean any number of things. I especially like how you make no mention of why the monster is a monster... Anyone can read this and use it as a mirror to hold up to themselves and examine their own monster. Really good stuff. Truly.

Posted 8 Years Ago


So far, an awesome write, I'm waiting for the completed one!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Great poem! We all can be full of anger, life is not at all like fairy tales that we once read! I see you take your anger and create. Well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I really like this piece since it I can totally relate. The flow and rhyme are wonderful. Awesome job!!!

Heather

Posted 9 Years Ago


like to see how this one turns out...

Posted 9 Years Ago



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The High Poet

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