Mama's Boy

Mama's Boy

A Poem by duff
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Their smile is a mask child
Please put down your knife
Why don’t we have a dance
Now that’s a bit better isn't it
And one and two and three
Tomorrow I have someone
A perfect trophy for my baby
Beautiful with supple breasts
I also bought better restraints
Brand new soundproof walls
Nothing but the best for you
There won’t be any runners
It’s time to get ready for bed
You have a big day tomorrow

© 2020 duff


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I had to fight this for much of my life..seemed as if my mom had not wanted me to be happy...always begging me not to get involved...but then three divorces later...perhaps she had something.
And I was the naive one even into my 50's---
Mothers know best...I sadly related to this.

Posted 10 Months Ago


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duff

10 Months Ago

Thanks Jacob. I appreciate your comments



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Very well written. This poem came across as twisted and very creepy, somewhat in the vein of Bates Motel. I enjoyed reading this. It's very visual with great imagery.

Posted 9 Months Ago


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duff

9 Months Ago

Very much along those lines. Thank you Carina
This feels sick & twisted in an exceedingly civilized way, much like the Norma Bates character, exquisitely portrayed by Vera Farmiga in the TV series Bates Motel years back. I love that series (have it on DVD & watch it every so often, just to stare in amazement at how sick this mother-son relationship is but how normal they both go on pretending that it is). I stare in amazement at your poem in exactly the same way, like I can't believe you went there! This is saucy as hell & I'm sorry there are other beloved writers who read this as a depiction of real life. Must be how some people feel it's so sick it must be farce when I describe my father the serial child rapist. Anyhow, your poem skirts the line of insanity with a flounce of thumb-your-nose (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

10 Months Ago

It's a sick and sinister poem which I had hoped wouldn't push readers away but it is what it is and .. read more
This is sad, and shows real strength at the same time, well thought-out, and passionate.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much.
I had to fight this for much of my life..seemed as if my mom had not wanted me to be happy...always begging me not to get involved...but then three divorces later...perhaps she had something.
And I was the naive one even into my 50's---
Mothers know best...I sadly related to this.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This comment has been deleted by the poster.
duff

10 Months Ago

Thanks Jacob. I appreciate your comments

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