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Breathe

Breathe

A Poem by duff
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The phone won’t ring

Everyone out of reach

The bodies are burning

The media can’t teach

Allegiance under flame

Heaven is just the sky

Daggers sold for fame

All their smiles are a lie

Stitched lips so pretty

Social beauty the best

Early latte committee

Infliction a path to test

Hurting you as a team

Paycheck the plateau

Riches bought a dream

Hell is the new chateau

© 2020 duff


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Paycheck the plateau
Riches bought a dream
Hell is the new chateau

Sounds much like modern times to me. When money and money makers are king. They might buy pretty things, but when life becomes dangerous, they don't count for much.. Now the things that do count like friends and family are being rationed.

Chris

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

2 Days Ago

Couldn't agree more Chris. Friends and family have never been more important. Thank you!



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Although I don't understand every line, (I'm lousy at deciphering poetry) the clear parts paint a frightening picture of these times. Perhaps a foolish optimist, I have hope that good can somehow triumph over evil and sanity over madness.

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

23 Hours Ago

Thank you Samuel
Paycheck the plateau
Riches bought a dream
Hell is the new chateau

Sounds much like modern times to me. When money and money makers are king. They might buy pretty things, but when life becomes dangerous, they don't count for much.. Now the things that do count like friends and family are being rationed.

Chris

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

2 Days Ago

Couldn't agree more Chris. Friends and family have never been more important. Thank you!
"hell is the new chateau"
that is the absolute truth...
yes, the media can't teach allegiance...we must teach ourselves.
there is no teacher in front of the classroom...
he is busy trying to keep his job...
what are his qualifications again?

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

2 Days Ago

We need our teachers more than ever. The CDC released numbers on suicide for the kids and it's awfu.. read more

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