A Teardrop On You

A Teardrop On You

A Poem by duff
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Gunshot bang we’re dead  

Beautiful we’ll remember

You were shots of life kid

Cold steel makes us live

Tomorrow we are shallow

The inferno has us awake

Details burn up presence

Weather report takes over

Pictures frame the hollow

Touch me forever please

Your makeup impression

Has me dreaming of you

© 2020 duff


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so many lines in this I wish I had written.
Cold steel ends life----the shots ring out, life can be so short.
Weather report is for tears to fall like rain.
But someone will make an impression on someone else, and then will be missed.
I like the "shallow" part....sometimes we make things more important than people...
and when that burns us awake, we lose our dreams.
another really absorbing write,
j.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much Jacob.



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so many lines in this I wish I had written.
Cold steel ends life----the shots ring out, life can be so short.
Weather report is for tears to fall like rain.
But someone will make an impression on someone else, and then will be missed.
I like the "shallow" part....sometimes we make things more important than people...
and when that burns us awake, we lose our dreams.
another really absorbing write,
j.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much Jacob.

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