The Cloud

The Cloud

A Poem by duff
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I hear you woman

I need your sound

Without it i’m zero

How is your cloud

I’m drifting off lazy

I smell your scent

Magic magnificent

Sandy toes a must

Your touch is trust



© 2021 duff


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Your poem represents how I feel lots of times, losing touch with myself, fading in & out of my own head, my own life, & most of all losing touch with society. Instead of thinking of this as a "bad episode", it's much nicer to welcome the cloud & float around it in a while (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

4 Weeks Ago

Thanks Margie



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Trust is everything. Without it you have nothing. Nice little piece of brevity duff. All the best.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

4 Weeks Ago

Cheers Chris
Your poem represents how I feel lots of times, losing touch with myself, fading in & out of my own head, my own life, & most of all losing touch with society. Instead of thinking of this as a "bad episode", it's much nicer to welcome the cloud & float around it in a while (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

4 Weeks Ago

Thanks Margie
Those that capture our heart and we hold them dear

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

1 Month Ago

Cheers Poetic Beauty.
Love it.
"your touch is trust"
to give ourselves to someone without hesitation...magic when we can feel this kind of closeness.
j.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

duff

1 Month Ago

Cheers Jacob! Every man needs that one woman.

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