Whiskey & Women

Whiskey & Women

A Poem by duff
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Grab the steel and your pride

Don’t forget the money stupid

The posse shakes the ground

Bullets fly the sun in their eyes

A round in the shoulder and fire

Ride to the rally point for a split

Light a fire it's time to cauterize    

Whiskey and women afterwards

When it's all gone time to reunite


© 2022 duff


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I'm more at the beer and bingo part of life. (laughing) But you know I don't begrudge anything to youth. If you got it flaunt it I always say. Seriously, do not "forget the money"? I don't have any. All I can do is have vague memories at best. I enjoyed the read.

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duff

1 Month Ago

Thank you Fabian



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I'm more at the beer and bingo part of life. (laughing) But you know I don't begrudge anything to youth. If you got it flaunt it I always say. Seriously, do not "forget the money"? I don't have any. All I can do is have vague memories at best. I enjoyed the read.

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duff

1 Month Ago

Thank you Fabian
I love this- it’s so entirely poetic and catchy, almost like a song. It feels like a victory song, one that makes me feel like I finally accomplished a life goal. I love the rhymes and not to mention even the title- that’s what made me click on it. Thank you so much for sharing.

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duff

1 Month Ago

Thank you Vertigo
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Gee
Hmmm, like whiskey, love women :)
Don't know how long I would have lasted in the wild West with a pickled liver, STD's ANNNNND all those bullets whizzing about :)
Hope you are keeping well Duff

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duff

1 Month Ago

Thank you Gee
Nice dance of words leading to the whiskey and the women. In some lives, all we had was to look for was the whiskey and the ladies. Thank you Duff for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

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duff

2 Months Ago

Thank you Coyote
Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

You are welcome Duff.
we do what we need to do to survive even if it is only for whiskey and women
both dull the pain give rise to false bravery
what can be said
we are men we are primitive we are thirsty for what is offered
many have succumbed to the powers of fast women fast steeds and a willingness to just ... do it

and interesting take offering truth as it is ...
'Light a fire it's time to cauterize
Whiskey and women afterwards
When it's all gone time to reunite'

Posted 2 Months Ago


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duff

2 Months Ago

Thank you Keith
the Youngers don't need the James....
but the posse got them and the Fords got one of the others.

maybe Whiskey will dull the pain of capture.

j.

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duff

2 Months Ago

Thank you Jacob
I seem to recall another recent one from you about the bandit theme. Rough life, that, whiskey and women notwithstanding. Hard way to make a living. Or dying.

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duff

2 Months Ago

Thank you John.

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