Pure and utter maddness

Pure and utter maddness

A Poem by Nechelle

Never ending never endingness
spinning round spinning round
madness
pure and utter madness
of never ending never endingness
spinning round spinning round
madness
pure and utter madness
pure and utter madness
I tell you
It's pure and utter madness
spinning round spinning round
of never ending never endingness
It's madness
pure and utter madnesss

© 2015 Nechelle


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Yes, it is.
Now I am left wondering what it could have been to leave you feeling like the world speaks another language from you. I feel this often. From self service checkouts that always make me want to punch them, to people who don't look where they are going, bump into you and look at you like you did just punch them in the face. This was fun to read, thank you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Feels like my day! Thanks for this: it made me smile.

Posted 8 Years Ago


just reading this I felt like I was going in circles, but like squiggly circles. I'm sure how to describe it. I feel like that was kinda what you were going for while writing this though. Good job.

[only one thing, the capitalization confused me. The first line is caps then nothing else, then only the I's.. I'm not saying you should change it. in my own writing I tend to capitalize in manners less than conventional. I was just wondering if yours was purposeful or you just weren't thinking about it or what?]

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on September 1, 2015
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Nechelle
Nechelle

Ssacramento, CA



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