The Roses

How madly cling the roses

to the moss grown crumbling wall

performing desperate poses,

they'd rather cling than fall.

Reviews

[marie]

short but still gets the point across in such a way that the reader is not left wanting for more, but pleasantly fulfilled this piece has many meanings to it, which i like in the fact that people can chose their own :)

[just is]

This is deep, so well written

[Michael G.]

I like how this screams at me to look at the roses and ponder them.
The beauty of nature knows no bounds.
You took a thought and made a mental, visual painting.
Well done.