DANGEROUS

.....read it to find out, duh!!

I don’t even know you

I know everything about you

I want to spend every day with you

You don’t even know me

I want to let you into my world

Will you let me into your world

Introduce me to your friends

Show me your world

My heart is racing

My eyes are hopeful

There’s no chance, there’s no f*****g chance,

I don’t even know you,

And yet when I see you, hear your voice, think of you

My heart races, wildly, I am Dangerous, I am falling for you fast,

I can’t stop thinking of you, you’d think I want to be you,

no no no, I am falling for you, and who will catch me, I will be alone again,

alone always because I’m too afraid to say things that mean anything, but

I’ll write these revealing poems hoping that no one will ever guess what they’re about,

Hoping they will, hoping you won’t, hoping you will, hoping people it’s not about won’t think

it’s about them, I never knew writing poetry could be so dangerous, but it is, can you feel it,

I wish you could, I wish you could see, I wish you would choose me, why can’t it be easier,

Easier to flirt with the taken, easier to be alive when I’m just a mess inside, easier to write crappy poetry like this, I know this is crappy poetry but I don’t care, I am Dangerous, but not to you, I am Dangerous to myself, my heart is racing.

Reviews

[George Love]

It was going along very well until you lost control of your writing and spun out in the final turn. IT has some very good points, but you can do and have done better writing. Let the art inside you come out again, and this "crappy poetry "will sing for all.

[Isericanormal]

Impressive. i truly liked this. and then hated it, cuz i remembed my past love and it brought all the pain back. lol really amazing i enjoyed this a lot. thank you for sharing (:

[Tina Kline]

Impressive with all the raw and confusing emotions. Love sure can be dangerous but exciting too.

[alec merdin]

awesome nice description and great expression of the emotions involved

[Breezie Kae]

I love the repetition of the word you. Nice job. :)

[Colleen C Dunphy]

I love how the pace picks up as you go on. It shoots straight to the heart.
Love is dangerous!

[Angel's Lady]

Damn, my heart is thudding in my chest! Way to drive the point home! The beat picked up until I felt like I was a passenger in a race car going around a curve.

Nicely done!

(I know it isn't me, but damn, you're right - you are dangerous!) ;)