A six-word Story...

A six-word Story...

A Story by Allie :)
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Was just testing out some new ideas... wanted to see how much raw emotion I could put in 6 words. My English teacher gave me the idea! :)

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For sale: Baby shoes, never worn.

 

Heart broken, she watches them kiss.

 

Blood dripping. What have I done?

 

Camoflauge-clad men fight for freedom.

 

Life meaningless, she fights for answers.

 

Noone cares to notice his hidden insanity.

 

Looking down from a place unwanted.

 

I do not belong in heaven.

 

Mistakes dictate who she will be.


 

 

 

 

© 2011 Allie :)


Author's Note

Allie :)
These aren't meant to be read in any sort of order, and none of them go together :) They're all seperate thoughts!

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DripDrip Drip... Drip... D r i p... D r i

The light in his eyes - fa d e d...

She almost touched his hand - once.

She never meant to say yes...
... didn't know how to say "no..."

She didn't see the dropped ring.

The blood - spread and soaked... away.

Short stories fit...even when followed in a line.

Hi

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow, I can't describe how amazing this piece is. I like that you tackled it from different angles.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow! This was creative and powerful. The first one, especially, stood out to me. Nicely done!
MKLINE

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Allie :)
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I am an Allie :) I love to write (duh) and wrote my first poetry about my hampster, Fluffles in the 3rd grade. I am a notorious flirt, but hey! What can I say?! I love the boys! :D But keep in mind,.. more..

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