Mr. Anti Feminst

Mr. Anti Feminst

A Poem by thecoolone52
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haha its suppose to be a really funny poem. IM hoping more people read this cuase i think im starting to get my grove back. If your a woman and your really into the whole feminst thing dont read this cause youll b offended. Which is the whole point of the

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Mr Anti Feminist
 
IM an anti feminist
I’ve seen the way
Where women live, cry
And B***h all day 
Hey Hey Hey
I know you all
Take it the solitary way
So be offended
Cause honestly
I don’t care either way
 
Driving down the highway
I swerve and shout
Cause its another woman
Cutting me off
In a menstrual clout
So impatient and so uncaring
Talking on the cell
And asking her friend what she’s wearing
 
IM an anti feminist
I’ve seen the way
Where women live, cry
And b***h all day 
Hey Hey Hey
I know you all
Take it the solitary way
So be offended
Cause honestly
I don’t care either way
 
Its not that I don’t like women
I’m no gay
I just can’t stand
How they act everyday
It’s either this or its that
IF my hats on sideways
They want me to flip it back
If my clothes are dirty
Im suppose to change them
If I disagree
It’s an argument to the third degree
In my opinion they all commit perjury
 
IM an anti feminist
Ive seen the way
Where women live cry
and b***h all day 
Hey Hey Hey
I know you all
Take it the solitary way
So be offended
Cause honestly
I don’t care either way
 
 
So a few more words
Before I go
Like SNOOP always says
We don’t love them hoes
So when they backstab you
Or support their feminism bling 
Just remember this one important thing
 
IM an anti feminist
I’ve seen the way
Where women live, cry
 And b***h all day 
Hey Hey Hey
I know you all
Take it the solitary way
So be offended
Cause honestly
I don’t care either way
 
 
 
 

© 2008 thecoolone52


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Personally, I like the Snoop reference, heh.

Posted 16 Years Ago


I like it! I think a man should be able to express himself and move on. There are those that like to express
themselves and we men have NO choice but to, "like it or lump it." So, yes I like it.
Alaska Sam

Posted 16 Years Ago


What are you trying to accomplish with this. It didn't seem to have any purpose other than to dis women- and it wasn't satirical enough to say anything either way. I'm hoping this doesn't represent your viewpoints because they're stereotypical and annoying. I did really like the chorus though. Something to consider though- feminism is an equality movement, but some modern day feminists miss the point and fight for women superiority in the worst ways possible. So in saying "anti-feminist" it in definition means anti-equality. I just don't feel that this poem translates what your trying to get across. The "I'm not gay" part was also rather homophobic. I'd advise that to be taken out. This could be funny but it honestly isn't. Just spend some more time on it and really think about what you're trying to say with this- it could be really meaningful and satirical.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hum...too young of an idea for me....men like women at night and when they are in the middle of a sexual route but that is all huh???? Maybe I need to have a long talk with my husband...I too felt a ryhythm in this more like a song..I always put God bless and then my name..on yours I think I had better put...God will you please bless this young man and set his thinking straight.....Valentine

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thats was funny! Great job!
I'm a semi truck driver, and the vision of women cutting me off, while talking on cell phones, is a very true scene!


Posted 16 Years Ago


... oh michael, your dead for this one. ha.


Posted 16 Years Ago


I don't know if it's 'funny' exactly, it is an interesting way of explaining your viewpoint, perhaps. It feels like it should be more like a song, doesn't it? The 'hey hey hey' bit really made me think of some 1990's songwriter, like Green Day or some such. At any rate, I can't wait to see the possible flak you get on this one, good luck!

Posted 16 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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