Loved it. I loved the rythym, the flow, the meaning, the humor, and especially the last part because I totally do the same exact thing.
PS. on a side note. MTV reminded me of it. I work at a nursing home and this lady was trying to take off her shirt cause she's crazier than brit spears. one of the nurses yelled at her and was like 'THIS AINT NO MTV MUSIC VIDEO!' True story, true story.
There's a lot of writing out there about this topic; people seem to have really enjoyed yours - I think it's the humour and the catchy rhyme scheme, and possibly the number of contemporary references.
You do make a good point about hypocrisy, and it hits hard due to the rest of the poen being more about the comedy than social commentary.
Overall, a decent and entertaining write.
p.s.
"S**t out Brittany" [= 's**t about'?] [also, is this a different Brittany/Britney, or are you mocking people's causal approach to spelling, even for their beloved celebrities, or...?]
I agree with the reviewer who said that "went crazy" would be more grammatically correct; however, the present tense makes this seem more conversation, so it's up to you [obviously].
Loved it. I loved the rythym, the flow, the meaning, the humor, and especially the last part because I totally do the same exact thing.
PS. on a side note. MTV reminded me of it. I work at a nursing home and this lady was trying to take off her shirt cause she's crazier than brit spears. one of the nurses yelled at her and was like 'THIS AINT NO MTV MUSIC VIDEO!' True story, true story.
nice insight. You have humor in there but you also have made your point. Why is it that we are slaves to the television and even more so the real time "drama" and destruction of other people's lives?
I like to write fiction. It has to be bizzare and orginal or its basically worthless to me. Cause if you write what someone else wrote then whats the point of writing at all? My gramar blows big donke.. more..