Saturn

Saturn

A Poem by thecoolone52
"

i was trying write a song but i wrote a poem instead

"

 

Saturn
 
Peering inside the telescope
A hidden treasure in space
A planet next to the moon
Without a smile on his face
 
Saturn with a hidden note inside
Taking a detour across
The gloomy skies
Apollo 13 has nothing on me
Showing off his jewelry
To the universe he sings
 
A lane around the top
With a ring on his finger
Grinning with gray holes
in the middle
Mystery aligns with the stars above
Wondering if this planet has people like us
 

© 2008 thecoolone52


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thecoolone52
holla at your boy

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a song is a poem
a poem is a song
i always like something
that gives me vision
and vision is learning


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I like to write fiction. It has to be bizzare and orginal or its basically worthless to me. Cause if you write what someone else wrote then whats the point of writing at all? My gramar blows big donke.. more..

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