the stars

Written June 7th and dedicated to a friend of mine. First two lines popped into my head when I was doing laundry. I know it's pretty cliche, but I like it the more that I read it. xD

She never believes me when I say I love her, But I'd reach into the sky and move the stars for her. She says I don't mean the things that I do, And won't listen when I say I'll become someone new. I'd search a whole field to find her a four-leaf clover; I'd die for her over, over, and over; For her I'd write something new to sing For her, I'd hang each star on a string, And hang every single one in her room. For her, I'd howl under the moon in June.

 

Reviews

[nukamichianpaux]

I don't think it's all too cliche, it's genuinely heartfelt.
Very mellifluous.

[A]

I love this poem! Very sweet! :)