Ch. 47 Promises and Regrets

Ch. 47 Promises and Regrets

A Chapter by theladygraceling

It takes ten minutes
to find parking
close to Miles's house.

It doesn't surprise
me or Will
that half the teenagers in town
are here.

There isn't one person
in the whole school
that hasn't been
to one of Miles's parties.

It's a unanimous vote
that he throws
the best parties.

That's because he has a huge house,
a pool,
a hot tub,
a trampoline,
the best stereo system ever,
great food,
an enormous basement with every game ever invented,
and a twenty-three year old brother that
never seems to mine
buying some drinks.

A lot of people seem surprised
that I'm there.
No one has really seen me
for three weeks.

I hear them whispering about me.
I know what they're saying.
This isn't like the toy store.
Everyone here knows what happened.

I want to leave.
But I promised Johnny. 


© 2014 theladygraceling


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Author's Note

theladygraceling
Let me know what you think. I'm also rewriting the story with a few tweaks and changes. It's the same story and the same plot but I made some changes to try and make it better. Check it out. It's just called Shattered Edited. Read it and tell me which version you like better. Thanks for reading.
--theladygraceling

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Hagerstown, MD



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I am seventeen years old. I have always loved reading and have recently started writing my own stories. I also enjoy drawing and sculpting, have taken piano and violin lessons for 10+ years, and have .. more..

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