Very Bad Sentence

Very Bad Sentence

A Story by The Little Writer
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 i walked along downstairs, feeling the squishy wall beneath my fingers.

© 2009 The Little Writer


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Posted 14 Years Ago


Not bad. I like the strange squishy walls beneath his fingers. The beginning doesn't make a lot of sense and of course it isn't capitalized, so that's bad.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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The Little Writer
The Little Writer

Don-Mage, WA



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I am 12 years old. I am now rewriting my abandoned book, "The Dwen Alliance" I started out my writing life when my mother signed me up for a writing class at my co-op school. My "career" really k.. more..

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