A Thousand Kisses

I can't even take credit, structure and prompt comes from KCthelastboyscout, which, by the way, you should check out his writing!

I remember my first kiss.

Pretty awkward, really public, and just inexperienced.

I hated it.

I've had funny kisses

Good kisses

Amazing kisses

Bad kisses

Terrible kisses

The worst kiss ever

Bad judgement kisses

Halfhearted kisses

Wholehearted kisses

Goodbye kisses

Reluctant kisses

But then, I met you, my last first kiss...and I knew you were the only one I wanted to kiss a thousand more times.

Author's Note

The cheesy statements are all KCthelastboyscout (this feels like plagarism, I'm so sorry), the context is all mine as are the revisions, the basic words are his and the meaning is mine, really, this is more of a collaboration than anything else, and that is the end of that.

Reviews

[Chris]

The problem with "cheese" is the reality it encompasses ...while we cringe.

[Andrea Greene]

If you can cringe awkwardly at life, it's been a full one, I suppose.

[Chris]

think on it for real - don't we all ...cringe... in our own discomfort when what matters is what's real?

[Andrea Greene]

Absolutely.

[Chris]

comes a time as you're out walking that holding hands just happens and that natural lift perks your heart and steps...

[Andrea Greene]

...this is correct on an unnerving level. 10/10.

[Andrea Greene]

I 'd like to clarify for someone in particular who read this, I did not mean the title literally, but I am 100% supportive of your interpretation.

[Onlyme]

The kiss that speaks volumes. And reach right inside the heart, mind and soul. And connects you with your soulmate. The one.

[Andrea Greene]

(long, dramatic, romantic sigh) Yep.

Thank you very much for the review- which was extremely poetic in and of itself, I might add.

[Lyn Anderson]

It's not plagiarism if it's a collaboration and you've given the co-author credit. And it is a lovely poem. Most of us can relate to all the kinds of kisses, and if we're lucky. Most of all, the last

[Andrea Greene]

Thank you for both your clarification and kindness!

[Crowley]

Collab or no, this really brings back great memories. We have all been there and I wish in a lifetime we could be there a little more often. Wonderful stuff, I enjoyed it!

[Andrea Greene]

Y'know, I wish that too. Thank you very much, and on that note, check out KCthelastboyscout's page!

[LazerRays]

This is a really good piece I enjoyed. I can feel the emotion in this! Good job!

[Andrea Greene]

Well, thank you so very much!

[KCthelastboyscout]

This was a team effort. I had a smart and amazing partner so she made my job easy
😊