A Thousand Kisses

A Thousand Kisses

A Poem by Andrea Greene
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I can't even take credit, structure and prompt comes from KCthelastboyscout, which, by the way, you should check out his writing!

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I remember my first kiss.
Pretty awkward, really public, and just inexperienced.
I hated it.
I've had funny kisses
Good kisses
Amazing kisses
Bad kisses
Terrible kisses
The worst kiss ever
Bad judgement kisses
Halfhearted kisses
Wholehearted kisses
Goodbye kisses
Reluctant kisses
But then, I met you, my last first kiss...and I knew you were the only one I wanted to kiss a thousand more times.

© 2018 Andrea Greene


Author's Note

Andrea Greene
The cheesy statements are all KCthelastboyscout (this feels like plagarism, I'm so sorry), the context is all mine as are the revisions, the basic words are his and the meaning is mine, really, this is more of a collaboration than anything else, and that is the end of that.

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The problem with "cheese" is the reality it encompasses ...while we cringe.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Andrea Greene

3 Years Ago

Absolutely.
Chris

3 Years Ago

comes a time as you're out walking that holding hands just happens and that natural lift perks your .. read more
Andrea Greene

3 Years Ago

...this is correct on an unnerving level. 10/10.
I 'd like to clarify for someone in particular who read this, I did not mean the title literally, but I am 100% supportive of your interpretation.

Posted 3 Years Ago


The kiss that speaks volumes. And reach right inside the heart, mind and soul. And connects you with your soulmate. The one.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Andrea Greene

3 Years Ago

(long, dramatic, romantic sigh) Yep.

Thank you very much for the review- which was e.. read more
It's not plagiarism if it's a collaboration and you've given the co-author credit. And it is a lovely poem. Most of us can relate to all the kinds of kisses, and if we're lucky. Most of all, the last

Posted 3 Years Ago


Andrea Greene

3 Years Ago

Thank you for both your clarification and kindness!
Collab or no, this really brings back great memories. We have all been there and I wish in a lifetime we could be there a little more often. Wonderful stuff, I enjoyed it!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Andrea Greene

3 Years Ago

Y'know, I wish that too. Thank you very much, and on that note, check out KCthelastboyscout's page!
This is a really good piece I enjoyed. I can feel the emotion in this! Good job!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Andrea Greene

3 Years Ago

Well, thank you so very much!
This was a team effort. I had a smart and amazing partner so she made my job easy
😊


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 8, 2018
Last Updated on July 8, 2018
Tags: love, kisses, awkward

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