My favorite thing.

My favorite thing.

A Poem by I'llXloveXherXforever

I wrote this for my girl friend when we were talking about what my favorite thing about her was.

My favorite thing about you?
My favorite thing about you is the way your laugh compliments your voice,
The way the sound of you voice complements the shape of your lips, 
The way the shape of your lips complements the way your nose crinkles when you laugh,
The way your nose crinkles when you laugh complements the way your eyes sparkle when I lay you down, The way your eyes sparkle complements the hope I've seen in your eyes since the day I met you.

© 2012 I'llXloveXherXforever

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This poem is beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago

I really like the style here, a domino effect, can't say I've seen one before but I really enjoyed it. It gave me a sense of "I know what's coming" just to get slammed with the realization that I didn't. Nice effect.
But anyway, I thought you had a lot of emotion in this one and just the fact that you included the smallest details really gave it the opportunity to be related to, but never duplicated. Nicely done

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on July 31, 2012
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