Fingerprint

Fingerprint

A Poem by thenakedverse

A thousand grooves made nude
is nothing but a Lover's maze.
I ravish every turn in absolute.
Designed to never temper
and seemingly untouched -
Each time a new unknown
and every avenue unused.
Safety in the form of rims and ridges
Grown soft by our abandon.
I trace on you your every printed strand -
My love both born and buried in your hand.

© 2012 thenakedverse


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That was just beautiful. Very sweet and to the point. If you ever decided to write some good descriptive pieces or stories I would be very interested in reading them. Your voice is prominent and is absolutely beautiful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


You have a great talent for imagery. That in itself is gift but coupled with the ability to finish the thought completely is great. Needless to say I loved it. Great job keep up the good work.

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Desined to never temper
and seemingly untouched






Posted 11 Years Ago


I interpreted a mysterious landscape discovered by zooming into the fingerprint. Mystery and love in the overlooked corporel everyday. Excellent ideas and images. Thanks!

Posted 11 Years Ago


A very nice poem.
I like the last two lines the most.

Posted 11 Years Ago


thenakedverse

11 Years Ago

thanks for reading!! i really appreciate it, i love getting input
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Added on November 29, 2012
Last Updated on November 29, 2012
Tags: love, fingerprint, maze, lover, hand

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thenakedverse
thenakedverse

Naperville, IL



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