PURANA GHAR ( in HINDI)

PURANA GHAR ( in HINDI)

A Poem by Pushkar Prabhat
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a HINDI poem but NOT in DEVANAGARI script. It is about the emotions one goes through while leaving one's chilhood home forever.

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wo makaan ki jisko bachpan se ghar bulaya tha,
ashiyana samajh ke barso se jise sajaya tha,
chor chale hai usko akhiri alwida keh ke,
dil me to use lekar, par vida le ke.
yaad aane ko to har diwaar bhi yaad aayegi,
gujre sadiyon ki jhalak jaan liye jaayegi.

wo chat pe jhanda jo ladakpan me kabhi lagaya tha,
phool ke paudhe jo shauk se mai laaya tha.
chal pade dur saaman me wo jhanda le ke,
ab ped ban chuke paudho ko dua de ke.
jab rang ghola tha tanki me wo holi, yaad aayegi,
wo bulb ki ladiyan to diwaali ki rangoli yaad aayegi.

isi ghar me to pehli baar maine kadam badhaya tha,
kaise bhulu ki pyaar ka pehla khat bhi to yahi aaya tha.
chal raha hu inhi yaadon ka bhaari samaan le ke,
aur kuch to majburi me ghar hi ke hawale kar ke.
itni khushiyo ke beech kuch to gam ki bhi yaad aayegi,
akhiri mahino me dendaaro se papa ki ladayi yaad aayegi.

ab naye ghar ko basayenge jaise ise basaya tha,
khushiyan fir aayengi jaise ghum, dabe pao chala aaya tha.
aur fir hum to ja rahe hai jeewan ka sabak le ke,
bhul to thi huyi par ab galtiyon ka karz de ke.
maana ki jahan jawan huye us angan ki kami satayegi,
ab jawan khoon hai jazba, bahaar laut ke fir aayengi.

© 2013 Pushkar Prabhat


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hum insaan hain aur samaye ki dhara me beh jate hain,,,
jaan to nahin unme jo shabdon me bayaan kar sakein,,,,
par chhorte waqt puraane ghar bahut kuchh keh jate hain..!


bahut achhi kavita likhi hai aapne. :)



Posted 9 Years Ago


This is stunning. very true. nicely crafted. Enjoyed reading this. overwhelmed.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Pushkar Prabhat

9 Years Ago

bahot shukriya aapka............... :) :)
simply amazing! very well expressed...

Posted 10 Years Ago


excellent work..!! ghar aangan hoki n diwali all these mean a lot and you've perfectly described it :) childhood and moving forward :) keep up..!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


mene kuch hindi mal sakthi hi, isleye poora arth nahi samach gayi, mem malayalam bol sakthi, valare nanayittundu, eniyum eshuthukka, thankallude kavitha nalla artha sampushttamannu, mattu kavithakal nannayi aswadhichu, bhasha english adhava malayalam aayirunnengil aagrahichu poyyi

Posted 10 Years Ago


Great write, emotions are expressed fully, enjoyed, love to read a poem in hindi

Posted 10 Years Ago


ghar....ghar mera sansar hai.....jab bhi sham ko mai ghar par jata hu sukun milta hai....Ek chinta bhi satati hai , mai maa se kahta hu mai bahar bade sahar mein ghar kharidunga par baad mei sochta hu kya mujhe waha nind ayegi....
Yadein aur bachpan sath chalta hai...
very kind poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


ghar....ghar mera sansar hai.....jab bhi sham ko mai ghar par jata hu sukun milta hai....Ek chinta bhi satati hai , mai maa se kahta hu mai bahar bade sahar mein ghar kharidunga par baad mei sochta hu kya mujhe waha nind ayegi....
Yadein aur bachpan sath chalta hai...
very kind poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very touching and moving. Loved reading a poem in Hindi for the first time on WC. Maybe be should start a club or something. Thank you for sharing Penny.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Penny

10 Years Ago

My pleasure divya. Well actually the group i created was for the same purpose but not many writers s.. read more
AYVID N

10 Years Ago

Ok. We will try again :)
Penny

10 Years Ago

Thnx
Hum jahan rahte hain, us jagah se ek prakar ki atmiyata mahsus karte hain aur is lagaav ko is kriti ke dwara utkristhtapoorvak abhivyakt kiya gaya hai.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Penny

10 Years Ago

Oh.. i didn't mean to hurt you, why did you delete the comment? Sorry.
Rehan Roy

10 Years Ago

My comment could be construed as a derision by anyone.

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Added on December 9, 2013
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Tags: hindi, home, ghar, bachpan, chilhood

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Pushkar Prabhat
Pushkar Prabhat

Bhagalpur, India



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