Beyond skin

Beyond skin

A Poem by Poetic_Vixen
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And he was the only one who looked at her, past her silk-like skin, into the rough patches of her soul.

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Slowly do secrets slip
from her satin guise
to her scars beneath,
a few still fresh
stealing her breath
at the brush of his fingertips,
but softly her aches ease
her knots loosen,
as his sweet embrace lifts her
off the ground, its gravity
the void and its insanity,
into his empty arms
fitting her bare being,
piecing the puzzle perfectly.

© 2024 Poetic_Vixen


Author's Note

Poetic_Vixen
The lover's effect. Grateful for you for stopping by.

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"Slowly do secrets slip
from her satin guise"

Wonderful lines there Muskaan. The poem opens with such beauty, moving on to the lovers' touch and embrace and the completing of the puzzle. The lover's effect is described in totality and you do it with a lot of very compelling words.

"as his sweet embrace lifts her
off the ground, its gravity
the void and its insanity,"

It makes me think of the reaching of a destination, the attaining of Nirvana and the sunset walk of two loved up souls.

You did a superb job of conveying the emotions here! Kudos my friend!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic_Vixen

1 Month Ago

In all honesty, love can be our saviour, it's often beyond description deeming us clueless to measur.. read more
DIVYA

1 Month Ago

You come up with such absolutely stunning lines!
Keep honing your brilliance.

.. read more
Poetic_Vixen

1 Month Ago

I'd surely follow after it. Have a lovely evening ❤️



Reviews

Love, pure, genuine, unconditional love heals scars from the past so no trace remains, hiding secrets best not known to a new love. When two souls become one, they both enjoy heaven here on earth, loosening pent up feelings, fears, anxiety and they bare their hearts, minds, bodies, spirits to each other. Love gives us wings to fly in the arms of our lover. The missing piece of the jigsaw matches perfectly to form the complete picture. A very delicate, sensitive poem which is flecked throughout in sensual depiction. Lovely write! Thank you for sharing, P.V...

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic_Vixen

3 Weeks Ago

So very grateful for this detailed review Marie! You're a kind one as always, have a lovely day!
Marie

3 Weeks Ago

Most welcome always, P.V. Wishing you a very lovely, blessed and joyful day too...
You are right dear poet. Sometimes we show our scars and we pray for more kindness. I enjoyed the emotion of the dance of love. I liked how you used the language. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. I did enjoy.
Coyote

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic_Vixen

4 Weeks Ago

Very glad to know you liked reading this. Grateful for your encouraging review my friend!
Luv that quote prefixing this sensuous, wholesome poem, only true love can reach those parts deep within the core with such pleasurable, longlasting effect...

Quality writing, your pen spills ink spreading delightful dalliance across parchment!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic_Vixen

1 Month Ago

You brought into notice that one liner I pride at, when it came randomly to me my face lit up like s.. read more
"Slowly do secrets slip
from her satin guise"

Wonderful lines there Muskaan. The poem opens with such beauty, moving on to the lovers' touch and embrace and the completing of the puzzle. The lover's effect is described in totality and you do it with a lot of very compelling words.

"as his sweet embrace lifts her
off the ground, its gravity
the void and its insanity,"

It makes me think of the reaching of a destination, the attaining of Nirvana and the sunset walk of two loved up souls.

You did a superb job of conveying the emotions here! Kudos my friend!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic_Vixen

1 Month Ago

In all honesty, love can be our saviour, it's often beyond description deeming us clueless to measur.. read more
DIVYA

1 Month Ago

You come up with such absolutely stunning lines!
Keep honing your brilliance.

.. read more
Poetic_Vixen

1 Month Ago

I'd surely follow after it. Have a lovely evening ❤️
A lovers embrace can heals wounds in ways we didn’t even know they needed. It takes the right person and the desire touch to let the past go and begin to grow in a positive direction. Ahh there is nothing better than to feel cherished!!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic_Vixen

1 Month Ago

Oh how right you are! It just takes the right kind of lover to make life a romance and I've turned a.. read more
Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

Romance is a beautiful thing.
Another beautiful poem. I love it!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic_Vixen

1 Month Ago

Very grateful for it.
Powerful work. You paint the scene well.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic_Vixen

1 Month Ago

Grateful for it.

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Added on May 29, 2024
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Tags: Poetry, romance, love, heart, intertwined, beauty, passion

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I'm an ardent lover hidden within the deep confines of my maturity, a lover of poetry and expressing deep meanings in the most mundane observations. Clearing out the mist crowding my soul and peekin.. more..

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