Pouring uncalled for.

Pouring uncalled for.

A Poem by Poetic_Vixen
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Some days rain makes way between those seasons we got too accustomed with, be it their heat or cold, catching us off guard.

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The dawn woke today with its tears streaming down the window panes,
still under a blanket of clouds, the hesitant sun stretches over its arcs;

there isn't radiance in its rays today
the kind that'd squint your eyes shut,
but warm nonetheless, as if empathetic for once
for those who shelter under its shine,
their bowed heads turned up unlikely today, with concern,

though it no more is a scarce possibility of the season going awry,
making it an even more of a worry.

It strikes me with a meek sense of sensitivity of this revelation of the day,
perhaps, its venting, letting its guard down,
and I welcome this sight,

the greens are in glee, there is joy splashing in puddles and paper boats in rivulets snaking down the side of streets, all under this weather's grace,

all under its pelting dismay.

© 2024 Poetic_Vixen


Author's Note

Poetic_Vixen
Sorta global warming stuff and how nature keeps giving. Also this piece, personification is my way of living.

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The seasons have gone a bit wonky here as well. It will be abnormally hot one day and then it normal spring temp the next. It seems to have set itself right the last week or so and we are right where we should be for it being the beginning of June. Still plenty of rain but not too much so that is good.

I like most weather except the cold and snow of winter. Winter for me is void of color and depressing much like the temperatures that come with it where I live.

This is a great poem to show weather and it’s unpredictably. I love the rain on the window pain and the sun warm but not too hot. Great description throughout this poem.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic_Vixen

1 Month Ago

The part of about how other seasons bring along colours is what we can't stop looking forward toward.. read more
Poetic_Vixen

1 Month Ago

Ah! It's okay, I don't mind since I can understand your confusion, as I sometimes have been in the s.. read more
Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

I’m glad it didn’t hurt your feelings!!



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The visual detail in this beautifully penned write is stunning, dear P. V... Weather world wide has diverted from its usual course. It is almost July in Ireland and looking out the window one would think it was late October/November weather. It's raining, very cold, and there's quite a wind blowing outside also. The little flowers will be shredded by morning! You have captured the unpredictability of weather superbly in this poem, dear poetess. I don't think it's global warming at all, but I do believe that all the garbage left in space by space ships and rockets sent from earth needs to be cleaned up somehow and perhaps, then we will have our normal weather back again? Hope your weather is just how you like it for the weekend, dear poetess. Enjoy! Lovely work! Thank you for sharing, dear P. V...

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic_Vixen

2 Weeks Ago

My dear friend, the garbage they in space is a massive trouble for civilisation after all and an exp.. read more
Marie

2 Weeks Ago

I agree 110% with what you say, dear P. V. You are always MOST welcome, my dear friend. Bless you al.. read more
This is the exact situation at my place. After days and days of scorching heat, the rain surprises you as if it heard you pray. It is so delighting the smell of the mud when the rain starts pouring. But the humidity as the result of the uncalled pouring can be so irritating. You capture the delight and the concern so flawlessly in your poem. Beautiful lines, dear Muskaan.
By the way, the weather is lovely here. Hope you have a pleasant weather there too :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic_Vixen

1 Month Ago

For now, it's scorching here after literally seeing dark heavy clouds in the morning yesterday and e.. read more
Sameeksha Vadisherla

1 Month Ago

It is my pleasure, dear Muskaan! Sending you love and joy too ❤️
Dear Muskaan,

Let me begin by complimenting you on the first lines where the sun is still kind of asleep in a blanket of clouds. Also,the 2nd verse where you describe the mellowed sunshine that doesn't scorch but provides rest and comfort. Really beautiful writing there. It's so effortless and good.

Pouring uncalled for....I related to this poem at multiple levels. Sometimes, such rain brings delight and at other times, dismay. Your words took me to both places. As the rain, so the events in our life, that are sometimes as sudden as rain,good or bad. So it was lovely to relate to that.

What I loved most about the poem was the description of the rain. It's high summer here and we are at the end of our tether so your rainy burst of words came as a very delightful surprise! This was indeed a pelting that felt very pleasant And A Pouring Called For! It was a treat to read all the lovely rain imagery.

Loved this poem, absolutely! Keep writing, my friend.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic_Vixen

1 Month Ago

Ah! Your review reminds me of the hypocrisy of my mood, how I decide for sure I will dance into the .. read more
The seasons have gone a bit wonky here as well. It will be abnormally hot one day and then it normal spring temp the next. It seems to have set itself right the last week or so and we are right where we should be for it being the beginning of June. Still plenty of rain but not too much so that is good.

I like most weather except the cold and snow of winter. Winter for me is void of color and depressing much like the temperatures that come with it where I live.

This is a great poem to show weather and it’s unpredictably. I love the rain on the window pain and the sun warm but not too hot. Great description throughout this poem.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic_Vixen

1 Month Ago

The part of about how other seasons bring along colours is what we can't stop looking forward toward.. read more
Poetic_Vixen

1 Month Ago

Ah! It's okay, I don't mind since I can understand your confusion, as I sometimes have been in the s.. read more
Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

I’m glad it didn’t hurt your feelings!!

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