A poem...

A poem...

A Poem by Poetic_Vixen
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Sometimes it lays bare, sometimes it sweeps dreams between the lines.

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Often a torn thread,
this poem
peeping through the gaps,
a bejewelled lace round my neck
of voices that buried deep in its skin.

Often a torn thread
unwoven dreams,
treachery to heart's honesty,
sometimes a wish that gave up
halfway through.

© 2024 Poetic_Vixen


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Poetic_Vixen
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Many time our poems come out from torn threads that we have witnessed in and participated in; in this life along its rocky and jagged way.

Poetry is deep embedded in our hearts, soul, mind, and body. It’s words are inked on paper the tells untold stories that others many not know we have encountered.

This is beautifully penned and the whole idea is relatable and the wording is perfect to get this idea across.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

You are welcome. I’m getting ready to write myself. I always take a few moment to catch up and rea.. read more
Poetic_Vixen

1 Month Ago

That's something relatable there and looking forward to your writings always!
Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

This one speaks of whiskey on the tongue. I may have to finish it tomorrow. I’m only two stanzas i.. read more



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Us, who love to write. We need a glimpse of a memory to awake our minds to writing. I enjoyed the flow of thoughts on my favorite subject. Sometime writing can be hard. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic_Vixen

4 Weeks Ago

Grateful for this heartfelt review!
Tremendous work. You make this come to life.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic_Vixen

1 Month Ago

Grateful for this!
Another classic write in this very meaningful and insightful poem, dear P.V. So often it is the torn thread which unravels the events in our lives and you have very poetically and artistically captured this in the poem. Love the many figures of speech in the poem and the rich imagery in the words. You always say so much in so few words, dear poetess. Lovely work! I love this succinct poetic gem and with a grateful heart, I thank you for sharing it...

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marie

1 Month Ago

NO gratitude needed, dear P.V. You are ALWAYS most welcome. Have a very lovely evening, relaxed and .. read more
Poetic_Vixen

1 Month Ago

That is the sweetest blessing I hope it comes true.
Marie

1 Month Ago

I shall pray each blessing becomes reality for you, dear friend...
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I particularly enjoyed your closing verse here. Words are born from the tearing of our life’s fabric, the sleeping mind in a state of dreaming or even from wishes we had that have yet to come true. A poem sweeps up the pieces of all these things and lays them in neat lines and a poem is unearthed full of personal meaning and ready to be shared.

It’s a unique way to express how our words evolve into the poems that speak for us on the page. A most interesting idea, well conveyed.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic_Vixen

1 Month Ago

Writing poetry seems like pouring resin over our emotions and over broken splinters of our hearts, c.. read more
Often times the words we put on paper are born out of the unsettling situations that life puts us in. I absolutely loved the imagery of torn threads, unwoven dreams here conveys the disappointment and resilience midst of all this there is bejeweled lace around your neck. Lovely way of describing how can one still be happy despite the mess happening around. I see this is a beautiful self reflection poem. A truly poignant write, dear Muskaan.
Have a beautiful day :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic_Vixen

1 Month Ago

I'm happy you could feel the exact essence of this poem I wrote, Sameeksha, the way you have layed i.. read more
Sameeksha Vadisherla

1 Month Ago

Your poetry is beautiful, Muskaan. Keep writing and sending you lots of love too ❤️
Poetic_Vixen

1 Month Ago

I will be most honoured to! Grateful for your support Sameeksha!
The analogy of a torn thread is really beautiful. It's when something significant in our life gets torn, that a poem usually emerges. I also like to envision the state of fragility of emotion that usually accompanies the writing of a poem. I'm sure you had that impression in your mind, while writing the poem, Muskaan.

I relate to and appreciate all the aspects of a poem that you describe here, so eloquently:

unwoven dreams,
treachery to heart's honesty,
sometimes a wish that gave up
halfway through.

Indeed, a poem is all these things and I loved how complete your analysis of penning a poem is. A poem is so much a dream, we never realize. And yet, we never give up that dream.

I could go on and on. Suffice to say here, I loved the poem.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic_Vixen

1 Month Ago

When I came up with this little poem I had a bothering void in my heart that we all are ought to mak.. read more
This is silk. Sometimes shuddering sometimes flowing and it is remarkable in all its parts.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Poetic_Vixen

1 Month Ago

This means a lot! I'm very grateful for this sweet and beautiful review ❤️
Many time our poems come out from torn threads that we have witnessed in and participated in; in this life along its rocky and jagged way.

Poetry is deep embedded in our hearts, soul, mind, and body. It’s words are inked on paper the tells untold stories that others many not know we have encountered.

This is beautifully penned and the whole idea is relatable and the wording is perfect to get this idea across.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

You are welcome. I’m getting ready to write myself. I always take a few moment to catch up and rea.. read more
Poetic_Vixen

1 Month Ago

That's something relatable there and looking forward to your writings always!
Poetic Beauty

1 Month Ago

This one speaks of whiskey on the tongue. I may have to finish it tomorrow. I’m only two stanzas i.. read more

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Added on June 2, 2024
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Tags: Poetry, love, heart, romance, story, dreams

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I'm an ardent lover hidden within the deep confines of my maturity, a lover of poetry and expressing deep meanings in the most mundane observations. Clearing out the mist crowding my soul and peekin.. more..

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