Stone Cold

Stone Cold

A Poem by The Realist

One should not look at beauty
as a gift,
for it comes with it's own
punishments

© 2016 The Realist


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I can see several different ways of interpreting this. Is the one being punished the beautiful one, or the one looking?
It could be a statement about how those who are beautiful have things they need to hide, or things they need to put up with because of their beauty, or that those who see it don't realize what they're missing by only seeing the beauty.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 The Realist

5 Years Ago

honestly, its all up to the viewer point of view.., but what i visioned whilst inking it out,... wa.. read more



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so much thought in this.. actually reading this made me zone out a bit and think.. thank you for that.. for writing a thought that makes a person dig a little deeper.. good work..

Posted 5 Years Ago


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 The Realist

5 Years Ago

your very much welcome DeerinHeadlights :) im grateful of your thoughts.
Hmmmm...truth. Though that truth is universal for al gifts. Nicely done

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 The Realist

5 Years Ago

thank you Lapseofmind
powerful. very powerful. i like it

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5 Years Ago

thank you very much Blood Rose
Angel of the devil

5 Years Ago

your very much welcome realist
Powerful truth. I dig this. R x

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 The Realist

5 Years Ago

thank you alittle pain much appreciated.
stone cold truth , its nit always a blessing , some dont see past the obvious but beauty is only skin deep.... love this piece !

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 The Realist

5 Years Ago

thank you Devious13 :)
A very concise poem that says a great deal about many ways 'beauty' is affected. I like it. One thing would be a change from 'shall' to 'should', but that's just an opinion.

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 The Realist

5 Years Ago

thank you i'm glad you pointed that out to me Ted. much appreciated.
Quite Intriguing Piece with deep Connotations! Leave's the Reader in Awe...

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 The Realist

5 Years Ago

Thank you very much Siddharth Roy:)
lovely piece of writing! deep thoughts! loved it, and totally agree with you

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 The Realist

5 Years Ago

im glad you do, thank you :)
An intriguing little gem to be sure
She made us think of beauty
But we get punished
To the core
....


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I agree with you that sometimes beauty is not gift but punishment.... I love it... Nice writing... :-)

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 The Realist

5 Years Ago

Thank you:)

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