Stone Cold

Stone Cold

A Poem by The Realist

One should not look at beauty
as a gift,
for it comes with it's own
punishments

© 2016 The Realist


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I can see several different ways of interpreting this. Is the one being punished the beautiful one, or the one looking?
It could be a statement about how those who are beautiful have things they need to hide, or things they need to put up with because of their beauty, or that those who see it don't realize what they're missing by only seeing the beauty.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 The Realist

6 Years Ago

honestly, its all up to the viewer point of view.., but what i visioned whilst inking it out,... wa.. read more



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Gee
Hmmm,don't I just know it.Look at me,go on,have a long hard look at my avatar,Gorgeous,can't go out without being harassed by butt sniffing wannabes.....

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 The Realist

6 Years Ago

ahhh okay. thanks Gee
I can see several different ways of interpreting this. Is the one being punished the beautiful one, or the one looking?
It could be a statement about how those who are beautiful have things they need to hide, or things they need to put up with because of their beauty, or that those who see it don't realize what they're missing by only seeing the beauty.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 The Realist

6 Years Ago

honestly, its all up to the viewer point of view.., but what i visioned whilst inking it out,... wa.. read more
Its incredible that such a short piece can have very profound meaning. good job! really enjoyed it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 The Realist

6 Years Ago

im glad you enjoyed it Linda, thank you for reviewing my work. that means a lot to me:)
Well written and very concise thought.


Posted 6 Years Ago


 The Realist

6 Years Ago

Thank you Usman :)
Very true and profound in a concise and hard hitting manner...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 The Realist

6 Years Ago

Thank you Poppy Ruth Silver.
This is a powerful statement and so very true - I like the italics and bold letters you used to really emphasize your thoughts - well done :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 The Realist

6 Years Ago

Thank you Carolynn:)
so true..
well written.. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 The Realist

6 Years Ago

Thank you.
So true......
well creafted.....
i liked it!!!
:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 The Realist

6 Years Ago

Im glad you liked it... Thank you Pushkar Prabhat..
Pushkar Prabhat

6 Years Ago

you are welcome!!!:):)
Everything comes with a price...you have got this concept brilliantly... :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 The Realist

6 Years Ago

Indeed it does.....thank you Ria Carol :)
spot on! there can most assuredly be a price to pay :) i like the short, powerful punch this has
E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 The Realist

6 Years Ago

Thank you Einstein Noodle :)

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