I am that star.

I am that star.

A Story by The Realist

I am a star that looks upon all at night,
I am a star that is always by itself,
You'll probably know me as the one that doesn't shine as much,
or the one that strays from the 'popular' constellations.
i am a star that gets picked on from the others because i am the smallest, even the man in the moon laughs at me.
But instead of spiting back at them i laugh back....... you wanna know why?
because i am a star that is alone for a reason, 
i stray from the constellation because when one burns they all burn, 
i am that star that is the smallest but is the most constant star there is,
i am a star that will always be looking out for you from above,
every night,
i am the star that is sometimes out during the day,
the one you tell your secrets too, the one to cherish them
or the star that cries with you, for i am the star that is alone for a reason...
to be a constant reminder that you will always have a friend and that  you are not alone..
Yes, I am that star.

© 2016 The Realist


Author's Note

 The Realist
Have you ever seen that star that is constantly there?? or is that just me?

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"i am that star that is the smallest but is the most constant star there is" is my favorite line... It reminds me how fast I got exhausted when I tried to please everyone... and now, I am looking for the ones who would like to have me shine over them with my dim light... I hope you don't mind me taking this personally:)

Anyways this is a beautiful piece that I can relate to:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


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 The Realist

5 Years Ago

no no please with all due respect, please dont shy away. honestly there is nothing more i want then .. read more



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There are more stars in the heavens than there are grains of sand on earth. So, your little star is very special. I believe I've seen that star on a late afternoon, shining in the distance. Good job.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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 The Realist

5 Years Ago

Very true indeed Ted Kniffen.
but im fairly confident that it is YOU'RE special star that you.. read more
"i am that star that is the smallest but is the most constant star there is" is my favorite line... It reminds me how fast I got exhausted when I tried to please everyone... and now, I am looking for the ones who would like to have me shine over them with my dim light... I hope you don't mind me taking this personally:)

Anyways this is a beautiful piece that I can relate to:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 The Realist

5 Years Ago

no no please with all due respect, please dont shy away. honestly there is nothing more i want then .. read more
This poem took me back to a road trip I took with my family. It would get particularly creepy and I would back with the windows down staring up at the night sky. somehow comforted by the fact there were so many stars watching over me. The Brightest of them all seemed to shine in tandem with my thoughts. Now that I am working I forgot about those moments.

Thank you for bringing back the memory



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 The Realist

5 Years Ago

im honored to have brought back such a happy memory. you are very much welcome Anamika :)
'i am the star that is alone for a reason... - to be a constant reminder that you will always have a friend and that you are not alone..'

The stars and i chat every night... and you, little star, merely whisper but, is most distinctly heard

The large, the mighty, the noisy, the play-actor eventually explode into fragments or lose their strength. You, sweet little star, hang shimmering in grace and lay such lovely thoughts and love to those needing your light. Thank you for being you.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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A poem about the North Star is what it seems to me. The reader definitely gets taken to the image of a lone star and then the north star springs to mind. It is a worthy piece of prose.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Very beautiful write dear Realist my lil' friend! I'm so glad you shared your deepest hearts words with all today...Big country hugs and smiles to you lil' one...Mary

Posted 5 Years Ago


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 The Realist

5 Years Ago

Im glad you read them:) thank you very much:)
Veronique

5 Years Ago

My pleasure sweetie...:)
i have seen a star that is always there. This poem is beautiful. I love it. it is powerful, beautiful, amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AMAZING JOB HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


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 The Realist

5 Years Ago

awww thank you very much...... much appreciated :)
Angel of the devil

5 Years Ago

welcome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
beautiful... this shows us no matter what, we are not alone. Thanks for sharing.

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 The Realist

5 Years Ago

Thank you very much Hannah Grace :)
I have seen that star. I love the way you made it a hero, so charming. I love the feeling of this poem. Very well written.....Kyam

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 The Realist

5 Years Ago

Thank you Kyam:)
Gosh this is so strong and beautiful. loved your easy flow of words and how the negative turns to positive. so inspirational

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 The Realist

5 Years Ago

im glad you liked it Lola Bee thank you:)

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