LOOK TO THE STARS!

LOOK TO THE STARS!

A Poem by Yes
"

Just a little something I wrote. I hope it is to your enjoyment. :)

"

        

Chin up, my dear
LOOK TO THE STARS!
There's something I have to tell you -
I love you...

But do you love me?

I want you to be here,
I want your heartbeat near
Do you want to see me?
You say I'm a good person...

Would my heartbeat be welome?

I want you to love me,
I'm here for you, right now
I want you and me to
Be we – us, together and happy...

Can you blame me?

Hush now, he says
Chin up, silly girl
LOOK TO THE STARS!
Theres something I have to tell you...

Do you want to know what it is?

Of course! I say,
With hope in my heart
And fear in my head,
Bravely I look to him...

What is it?

I love you too,
Silly dear.
I have all this time.
I just couldn't tell you...

 

 

 

© 2009 Yes


Author's Note

Yes
It's an attempt of mine to write something with a happy ending. It's not too epicfail, is it?

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Aww, I think this is simply adorable! Anything that makes me smile big is an instant win =]

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

No, it's not an epic fail at all. This was well penned, and it was (and still is) to my enjoyment. Thank you.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aww this was sweet, and for sure it changed his dream. I liked the airy flow of it and unconcerned light way it was written, no drama, not too personal. loved.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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