Can't Move On

Can't Move On

A Poem by theunknownchick

Can’t Move On

Why can't I just forgive and try to forget?

I know i will cry,

but why did i still try?

I was hurt but i still love.

I was betrayed, but I still hope.

I've been left, but why do i still wait?

I know how to hold,

but i don't know how to let go.

I know how to dream,

but i don't know when to wake up.

I know how to fall,

and Im learning how to get up.

© 2009 theunknownchick


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aww. I loved this. It was very sweet and simple.

Posted 14 Years Ago


now that's adorable!

Posted 14 Years Ago


a beautiful simple piece. we've all been there, we all have had to learn these lessons.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Lovely poem... I've been through the same kind of feeling. It brought back the old memories. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Good poem. A little off in places but great message!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Great Piece! Loved the flow and in the end.. signifying that you are "learning" ends it with.. I am not finished yet.... thanks for sharing

Posted 14 Years Ago



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