Girls Listen Up

Girls Listen Up

A Poem by theunknownchick
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Guy's POV

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P.G. 13 for language.

 

Facts about us guys,

Not everything we say are lies.

When we say you're beautiful we mean it,

We never shave our legs so get over it!

Were not as perverted as you all think we are,

Size doesn't matter except when you don't want your relationship to get any far.

We love you as who you are,

So please don't get pissed when we talk about cars.

I know sometimes we arrive late,

Doesn't mean we forgot about our date.

We really hate when you say Chace Crawford is hot,

We think he's gay so clearly he's not!

And don't freak out when we forget to call,

Just try to remember that were here everytime you fall. ♥

© 2009 theunknownchick


Author's Note

theunknownchick
Thnx to my friend for giving me ideas and yea hope you like it.

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I really enjoyed this poem, and I’m looking forward to reading more of your pieces. I'm kind of new on here and it would be an honor if you can review my 4 new recent poems. (The world is ours, Nostalgia, Paradise, and You)

Thank you and Keep up the Good work!

Posted 2 Years Ago


haha very cute

Posted 10 Years Ago


Honestly, the begining was boring, i didn't want to continue to read it. BUT i did.
The middle was better, the the ending sold me.
"And don't freak out when we forget to call,
just try to remember that were here everytime you fall"

That was my favorite part. 75/100 :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


oh yea, pshhh Chace isn't THAT hot O_o i've seen better XD haha oh yea, girls just can't read guys right :) 'cept for me. cause i'm a beast :D yess this just made my day. since the rest of it will consist of homework and...homework. thanks for the great read ^_^

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ha...
Funny.

Posted 10 Years Ago


lol, that was great. No wonder my ex was so uptight when I talked about Chace Crawford.XD

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was an interesting perspective writing from the inside of a male person's imagination i admire that cannot say i have done the roles reverse thing myself but it would be interesting to write from a females viewpoint nice poem it flowed beautifully and had alot of guts well done you hit us guys bang on with the descriptions here, i expect it is a girls perogative to want to change their bloke as we can't all be as perfect as the modern day princess assumes herself to be.

Posted 10 Years Ago


That was pretty humorous... I think guys and girls always tend to miss read one another.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Aww haha that is a guys thoughts... deep deep down. Great job expressing that in a unique and creative way. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


LOL XD like it..

Posted 10 Years Ago



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