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Outside my window

Outside my window

A Story by The Unknown Sith
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Outside my window

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OUTSIDE MY WINDOW

There's a monster outside my window.
He says he can help me die...if I just let him come inside.
All cause he heard me wish I didn't feel this pain anymore!
He says he can take it all away.
Come inside.
Slipping under my floor,
Creeping under my bed,
Slowly seeping into my sleepy head.
Dream-awake but,
I cant wake up-nightmare.
I can feel him standing beside me.
Then like a Python he constricts every exiting breath like a weight that lifts,
Only to a returning breath with more distress.
He mimics till there's no inconsistencies left.
Synchronized with twisted tongues of lies.
He's inside.
The more I try the more I die, the more he comes alive.
Till I feel no more.
Slowly seeping out of my head.
Slipping under my floor,
Creeping under my bed,
with every word his twisted tongue says.
Dead.
I'm standing outside my window.
Looking at a monster in my bed,
that looks like me...smiling back as it waves; so friendly.
 by  the sith unknown

weeds
Plot: simply put in a plotted prison with brief visitations ...from the sun.
A b*****d! I can't leave this place, for I'm rooted.
Loved by no one for planting these seeds of division amongst a garden with no sign of Eden.

the unknown sith

© 2019 The Unknown Sith


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I've got a monster in my head! It's called wanting to write I liked your style!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Unknown Sith

2 Months Ago

"I've got a monster in my head! It's called wanting to write I liked your style!"
Thnx for th.. read more
Nice imagery. Everybody has a little monster in them. Nice alliteration in places, like 'slowly seeping into my sleepy head'.
I liked it!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Unknown Sith

3 Months Ago

Thnx. "Everybody has a little monster in them." So true.
Well written and thoughtful.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Unknown Sith

3 Months Ago

"Well written and thoughtful." Thnx.

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Added on May 28, 2019
Last Updated on September 23, 2019
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