Inverse

Inverse

A Poem by Jacob
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entry into tovli's 10/40 poetry competition

"

“Adam” said Gob; don’t touch the I-pod.

 

“Why the tricks?

Uncanny; the proximity”

 

”sleight of the council;

Flat was the decision.

So the sexes were exchanged; 

During their birth.

I bore a daughter

ruler over the mountains 

32 years pre-origins.”

 

 

 

 

© 2009 Jacob


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very original. thank you for sbmitting. sorry it was a bit late, but there is a new one comming up. also, feel free to join WV Writers--we have contests weekly and you are welcome to join in! New ones are just about to start. tovli

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I thought you did an excellent take on the "Ten". Sorry you didn't
make the contest! Oh well, next time! ~ Helena ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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