attention//addiction

Well, I'm not very good at descriptions.

Look at me.

           

I have an insatiable thirst for attention

                 For the roaring claps of the crowd

                 The only sound that oppress,

                 the pressure, screaming out loud.

Author's Note

All sorts of feedback are welcome.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You said a lot in the short poem. Left the reader with question. Good to seek attention and good to seek quiet. The ending left me the need to know the who, what, where, when and how of the oppression, pressure and the scream. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[lrebel]

This made me think and that is what good writing should do. I'm confused by the placement of the comma after oppress or I'm not reading the tense correctly? I enjoyed this with my interpretation. Thanks .