He came

One night

One cold rainy night

He came

He came into my room

While I was sleeping

He came into my room while I was dreaming

Dreaming about running through grass fields

Smiling and laughing

He came while I was lying in the field

I could smell the sweet flowers

All I heard was a “shhhh”

He told me not to make a sound

What are you doing daddy I asked

Again he said “Shhhh”

Just relax baby, you’ll like it

I had didn’t know what he was talking about

Then he made me undress’

Then he did it

I was confused

When he was done he just left me lying there

He left me there all by myself

While I cried myself back to sleep

He took my innocence

The next night

I was scared to go to sleep

 

Because I knew he would come again

And I was right

He came over and over and over again

And I was alone

Each and every time

Reviews

[paradise]

Powerful and amzing but extremly sad

[Raquisha]

This is such a sad and powerful poem. I hope this hasnt happend to you. But this is agreat write

[Kat]

This was incredibly powerful. It was so hard to finish reading it. I love how you captured the emotions of a child so simply but powerfully. It brought tears to my eyes. Amazing work.

[SS2Dante]

I struggled to get to the end of this...(which is entirely to your credit).
Powerful stuff.

[alegria]

it is a poem giving out d emotions f a kid..almost got tears..i kno it happens to many...:(((

[Black]

it is so sad..
made me cry almost..
i hope this hasnt happen to you..
this is one of the worst things that can happen to a kid...
those dads should be ... be... put down..
wow, that was cruel of me to say
i should shut up now

[WritersSoul]

This is so cruel, from how strong each line is, the pain is visible. And so many children go through it, and you can display this very well. This is sad to read to.
Thank you for sharing it with us

[Jupiter Jazz]

Dear God... I knew it. I knew as soon as I read the first line that it was gonna be like that. I'm going to pray to God that that isn't your personal situation... That was just heart wrenchingly sad and.... jeez, it makes me wanna cry

[Dove]

Everyone thank you so much for the reviews. I really appreciate them.

[TadKent]

Oh my gosh.
So many emotions right now.This is heartbreaking. Intense. The innocence of the phrasing made it even more heartbreaking. Well done.