World Free of Haters

I had a nice time writing this.

I’m going to keep spreading this message even if it kills me

To stop is something I’m refusing

Put your head up, open your eyes

Don’t be afraid to be you, wear no disguise

Keep climbing till you reach the top

Don’t worry about the haters cause for them it’s going to be a scary drop

This is for you and me

It’s ok to live out your dreams

Disagree?

It's ok feel free

I may be only sixteen but I’ve learned a lot in this life

One thing I learned is life is full of strife

But you have to learn and push through it

This is your life; you’re the one who controls it

It doesn’t matter what you look like

You're a person and every person has a light

It doesn’t matter what you you’ve been through

It’s irrelevant what you see when you look outside your window

Picked fence or barb wire

Are your hands already raised?

 Oh well then raise them higher

I may be five six but I swear I feel like I’m six eight

Now let my words be like a switch blade to a haters ribcage

Never let anyone stop you from heading up

Just do you, shut them up

To all the haters I really just want to say thanks

Because your hate is what gave me my strength

Thanks to you I am who I am now

Thanks to you other people will be strong now

And to all you haters who look down on me

I'm telling you now, I'm tearing down your balcony

To you reading this have no fear

To all you haters, get the freak out of here

For this generation I have great expectations

The haters have to go I dont care what it takes

A third world war or another revolution

Down with the negative up with the postivity

No more bad energy thats where this world needs to be

When I step out my house I want to see

Something that this world needs to be

Better. I want to see a world free of haters

Their rein is over

I want to see a world free of haters

 

 

Author's Note

This poem is now done! Haters in this piece stands for the people who are always negative, the people who tell you you cant do anything, and the people who always try to hold you back. I hope you like it and please give me some feed back:D

Reviews

[Dezzyray]

its very blunt like mee! :3 i like the message, it's powerful and somehow inspiring for me

[paparapapa]

Very straightforward. And I love the message of this poem. Very true. I also want a world free of haters. :) Great write. ;)

[Thea]

"Don’t be afraid to be you, wear no disguise
Keep climbing till you reach the top"
This sounds really better than the first version...We should not care about haters...Let's live our lives to the fullest!
I like this poem! Job well done! :)))

[Robbie~xoxo~]

WOW! Very uplifting!...This makes you strive to overcome the hate. You won't find a hater here! I love this..."You're a person and every person has a light." ~Well said!

[Bridget Murphy]

Amazing, haters make the lovers, this is a really good poem i totally enjoyed reading this!!!:)

[Ruth]

Powerful meaning love :)
Individuality is paramount and I shall never singing that tune either!
Wonderful xoxo

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Last two lines are the strongest in this powerful poem!

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

This is good so far!!

[Jessi Leigh]

Very motivating, with a nice flow. I enjoyed the message :)