Too Short To Last

Too Short To Last

A Poem by Silently Living As Hazel
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A poem about seasons changing

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You're stuck in the past but need to look forward
See summer in its prime days
Wondering why it's cold so you finally turn
Only to find everything green turning
Beautiful colors: Red, Yellow, Orange.
After saying good-bye to summer
It's only a few short weeks
With the a season we call Autumn.
Winter comes faster than you know
Making you thicken your coats,
Wear boots,
And Celebrate
The first layer of snow
Pure and so white
Makes you believe
In the life having
Joy
That's TOO SHORT TO LAST

© 2010 Silently Living As Hazel


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First, I checked you out because I really liked your name, "Silently Living As Hazel," a little poem in itself...
I really liked the imagery in these lines...

Wondering why it's cold so you finally turn
Only to find everything green turning
Beautiful colors: Red, Yellow, Orange.

Making you thicken you coats, (I Really like this line!!) I was wondering if you mean your or with? coats - but I still think it's a great line

See summer in it's prime days (correction - its)
That's TO SHORT TO LAST (correction - TOO SHORT)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is amazing really, I enjoyed the winding down at the end, starting with
The first layer of snow. Awesome write and enjoyable!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

time does tend to flow faster and faster, at least this is the impression most people have. and the truth is we should always treasure what we have in present :). very well done here!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

First, I checked you out because I really liked your name, "Silently Living As Hazel," a little poem in itself...
I really liked the imagery in these lines...

Wondering why it's cold so you finally turn
Only to find everything green turning
Beautiful colors: Red, Yellow, Orange.

Making you thicken you coats, (I Really like this line!!) I was wondering if you mean your or with? coats - but I still think it's a great line

See summer in it's prime days (correction - its)
That's TO SHORT TO LAST (correction - TOO SHORT)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's awesome! I love it! Really well done, and awesome flow! And such a loud ending. lol. No really nice job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Silently Living As Hazel
Silently Living As Hazel

Muskegon, MI



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