Confusion

Feelings to cry
Until the tears run dry
Cry to release
While the hearts begins to ease
Release of the quietness
As she becomes heartless
Quietness of the yells
As wishing she could do one spell
Yells of you
As she gets blame without a clue
“You this you that” “What was wrong?”
The many times she said it was like a song
Wrong after wrong
As she questions herself
Not knowing it was nother it was one self..

Reviews

[Gee]

Good morning Tiana. Have just read numerous poems of yours, all with views but no reviews. The reason for this, I think, is that all of your works are a series of rhyming(ish) couplets that when put together as stanzas have little fluidity or story behind them...sorry.
Hope this is taken as meant, a critique, and not as criticism.
Good morning

[tiana hernandez]

I appreciate it everyone has their opinions and thank you but it’s my style within poetry..most do rhyme because its how I do poetry, and people do understand it as long as they reread it a couple times. Trust me every stanza has a story you just have to think :-). Thank you though

[Gee]

I will go read through a few again :)

[tiana hernandez]

:-) There all deep poems, that I write for people to relate to, whether its my story or a story for someone to relate to. I use rhyming because it goes with my flow and it goes for how poetry used to be..im someone who wants to bring back how things used to be back in the society, such as love, as passionate, as respect. Keep reading, all my poetry is stories and connections within life and real events as well.