Notes and Letters

Music molds into words,

words cast into music,

Hit the notes,

coin the right words.

 

Pull the sterling string,

let its rich sound resonate

in the dark, the pulse thudding

into every fibers of the heart.

 

Fingers of the breeze,

caressing the golden windchimes,

scratching of pen against

parchment, scribbling rhymes.

Author's Note

an attempt to make a poem..very short, i doubt if it relay half of the message i wanted to tell...

Reviews

[Joseph - Michael]

And it sure is a very well attempt to create a poem like that. It may be short, but it doesn't have to be long, either. Because any of the very short messages always mean many great things. The readers and I just have to see what the secrets lie within the words and the lines...

The third stannza had shown a great deal of impact...

So, it's all still good tho...

[fireblossom]

Another very good poem. This is a good form for you. It will help you form paragraphs and scenes for longer pieces.

We make music on paper or on strings...it's all music to feed our insatiable hunger. Well said poet.

[poetic soul]

scribing rhymes! loved the idea behind this poem and way you presented it...doesnt really look like English is yo second language... :) nice one pal....

Regards,
Poetic Soul

[Arthur Crow]

This is very ethereal in the way it flows.. I really liked the word choices. Quite a good poem! :)

[Jacquelene Vanessa More..]

i love your descriptions they are very beautiful

[Philosophile. (Maddy)]

Bravo! Gorgeous gorgeous gorgeous! I absolutely loved this! The imagery and comparison of writing to composing music is beautiful and true. I am in awe.

[two sides of the same p..]

i liked it was good your good at writing you should put more on here id love to read them

[*SacredWriter*]

This is really nice poem. I really enjoyed reading it
The last stanza is my overall favorite part ^_^

[Jetta Zippora]

Awesome write! The image is magical, and it all comes together in a rhyme of brilliance! Love it!