Cold

Angry hoping
Wishful thinking
A longing that never can never be filled
I'm so numb right now

Reviews

[KurKota]

I like the phrasing here. I probably shouldn't have a review statement longer than the poem. :) I understand what you were doing here. Good job !

[Kitt]

Very short and to the point. I feel this could be a begining of a longer poem explaining your feelings and the situation. Perhaps think about adding on to this peom. Like explain in poetic language why you feel that way.

[GhostlyAuthor]

Thank you for reviewing. Yes it is short, I was experimenting with poem length and rhythm. I believe that the length of this poem allows the reader to put their own emotions and experience into their interpretation of the poem.

[PokemonFan#1]

Short and to the point. The first two lines of this poem are my favorite :) All in all, I love this entire poem. There are so many things I could imagine when reading this over and over.

Keep it up!
=^-^=

[GhostlyAuthor]

Thank you!

[PokemonFan#1]

You're very very welcome~ ^3-