It all depends on you

I know you don't believe in what I'm telling you.

The truth is right in front of you, but you don't want to believe it.

You don't want to know what strange fantastical things are out there, waiting
to be found.

To be found by you.

Trust me, some the things that I've seen, the things that my travels have shown me, are far stranger.

I can attest to that.

I've witnessed things that people called impossible, but I still saw them.

There's a world full of strange, sometimes frightening, sometimes delightful, indescribable, wonderful, magical impossible world hidden just beneath the surface of the one you thought you knew and you're almost able to grasp it, it's at the tips of your fingers, but you're not there yet.

But I can take you there, grab you by the hand and pull you in, and immerse you, in that world.

It all depends on whether you reach out or not.

Reviews

[KurKota]

Again, I really feel what you are saying here. Your statement about reach out....make an effort to see what is below my surface..and you will take it further in, is very good. I like what you are saying in this piece, and I react positively to it. Here again, I feel that the structure as such could use a bit more refinement to make the flow a bit better, but equally it is your somewhat randomness is what reflects your sparkling personality within it also, so maybe too much formatting efforts would stifle that too much. You have to decide that, but just a suggestion for flow. Good writing and expressing of your feelings and thoughts !